Tuesday, May 18, 2010

On 5-7-5

Inspired by Liza and dancing, dancing, dancing.

All these bitches crawls-
Hitting a wall of hot air
Coming down the stairs

To the sweat drop down-
Flailing bodies of spudents
Hands up in the air

All skeet skeet mother-
Dancing on a rocking floor
I got a feeling…

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for the shout out!
    This is a wonderful haiku.

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